Afternoon Stroll


  • Who is the person?
  • Where are they going?
  • What are they carrying?
  • Do they know what’s behind them?
  • Describe the creature behind them. [Look at the eyes, the fangs, the scales…] What is it? Where did it come from? Was it there all along?
  • What is it going to do?
  • Describe the moment when the person realises that there is something behind them – try to build the atmosphere and make the reader feel tense. How do they find out? [rumbling? growling? a single rock bouncing across their path?] How will they react?

Credit: Matt Dixon

  • ruthkeys
    Posted at 06:17h, 10 September Reply

    Amazing! Loving the sinister alongside the naive 🙂

  • Ames
    Posted at 17:03h, 18 February Reply

    Love this!

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